Bug 33444 - Move UVMM section from extended network documentation to UVMM chapter
Move UVMM section from extended network documentation to UVMM chapter
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Product: UCS manual
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Virtualisation / UVMM
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: P5 normal (vote)
: UCS Errata
Assigned To: Philipp Hahn
Moritz Muehlenhoff
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Reported: 2013-11-18 09:43 CET by Moritz Muehlenhoff
Modified: 2014-07-04 11:15 CEST (History)
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Description Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2013-11-18 09:43:49 CET
This should be moved to the UVMM chapter in the manual. In addition, the link in UVMM needs to be updated.

+++ This bug was initially created as a clone of Bug #32792 +++

The configuration of VLANs, bridges and bondings is now covered in the manual. The extended documentation needs to be reviewed. Maybe the documented can be obsoleted entirely.
Comment 1 Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2014-03-31 12:07:05 CEST
r48889: The remaining UVMM related parts from computer-3.2 have been moved to the main manual. The information is now split into two parts: One part in the basic-settings → network configuration → bridge/vlan/bonding regarding the init scripts.
The other part is a new section about UVMM profiles, containing the update part.

computer-3.2 is now empty and has been removed.

As the extended documentation was in English, it has been back-translated to German by myself. The English version should be proof-read too, as the working had to be adapted.

<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/manual-3.2.html#uvmm:networkinterfaces>
<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/manual-3.2.html#uvmm::profile>
<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/manual-3.2.html#computers:networkcomplex:uvmm>

<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/handbuch-3.2.html#uvmm:networkinterfaces>
<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/handbuch-3.2.html#uvmm::profile>
<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/handbuch-3.2.html#computers:networkcomplex:uvmm>

Profile-Section is now also referenced by
<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/manual-3.2.html#uvmm::drives>
<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/manual-3.2.html#uvmm::instanz::erstellen>

<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/handbuch-3.2.html#uvmm::drives>
<http://jenkins.knut.univention.de:8080/view/Doku/job/UCS-3.2%20Handbook%20UCS/ws/webroot/handbuch-3.2.html#uvmm::instanz::erstellen>



The links in UCRV descriptions in UVMM-node-common have been updated as well.
univention-virtual-machine-manager-node_2.0.5-5.76.201403311132
r48892: 2014-03-14-univention-virtual-machine-manager-node.yaml
  * The documentation for configuring bridges has been moved from the extended 
    documentation into the main manual. The links were updated accordingly.
Comment 2 Stefan Gohmann univentionstaff 2014-04-03 06:32:03 CEST
The changes in uvvm-node block the errata update for uvmm-node. Please revert the uvmm-node changes and file a separate bug. I think it should not be fixed before the docu update is online.

Another problem is that all links to the computers-3.2 document are no longer valid.
Comment 3 Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2014-04-03 08:48:29 CEST
r48998: revert URL update
univention-virtual-machine-manager-node_2.0.5-8.79.201404030845
r48999: 2014-03-14-univention-virtual-machine-manager-node.yaml

The computer-3.2.html is still on docs.univention.de and will need manual deletion. Until then the document is still available.
Comment 4 Erik Damrose univentionstaff 2014-04-03 09:57:42 CEST
(In reply to Philipp Hahn from comment #3)
> r48998: revert URL update
> univention-virtual-machine-manager-node_2.0.5-8.79.201404030845
> r48999: 2014-03-14-univention-virtual-machine-manager-node.yaml
> 
> The computer-3.2.html is still on docs.univention.de and will need manual
> deletion. Until then the document is still available.

Changes verified, yaml file OK.
Comment 5 Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2014-07-04 10:55:01 CEST
I've commited a few typo fixes in revision 51515. Otherwise verified.