Bug 30946 - Review UCR variable descriptions for management packages
Review UCR variable descriptions for management packages
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Product: UCS
Classification: Unclassified
Component: General
UCS 3.0
Other Linux
: P5 normal (vote)
: UCS 3.2
Assigned To: Moritz Muehlenhoff
Philipp Hahn
: interim-2
: 11737 (view as bug list)
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Reported: 2013-03-28 14:39 CET by Moritz Muehlenhoff
Modified: 2013-11-19 06:43 CET (History)
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More fixes (8.72 KB, patch)
2013-09-23 16:28 CEST, Philipp Hahn
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Description Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2013-03-28 14:39:03 CET
The UCR variable descriptions for the packages in base/ should be reviewed:

- Are descriptions missing?
- Are they comprehensible and self-contained?
- Are the syntactical options obvious for the user?
- Quality of the English translation

./univention-directory-manager-modules/debian/python-univention-directory-manager.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-directory-manager-modules/debian/python-univention-directory-manager-cli.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-directory-listener/debian/univention-directory-listener.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-admingrp-user-passwordreset/debian/univention-admingrp-user-passwordreset.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-management-console-frontend/debian/univention-management-console-frontend.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-management-console-frontend/debian/univention-management-console-web-server.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-directory-reports/debian/univention-directory-reports.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-ldap-overlay-memberof/debian/univention-ldap-overlay-memberof.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-directory-notifier/debian/univention-directory-notifier.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-legacy-kolab-schema/debian/univention-legacy-kolab-schema.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-management-console-module-udm/debian/univention-management-console-module-udm.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-management-console/debian/univention-management-console-server.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-ldap/debian/univention-ldap-server.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-ldap/debian/univention-ldap-acl-master.univention-config-registry-variables
./univention-ldap/debian/univention-ldap-client.univention-config-registry-variables
Comment 1 Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2013-09-11 14:35:13 CEST
*** Bug 11737 has been marked as a duplicate of this bug. ***
Comment 2 Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2013-09-13 14:58:53 CEST
The UCR variable descriptions in the following packages have been revised:

univention-legacy-kolab-schema
univention-ldap
univention-directory-notifier
univention-directory-manager-modules
univention-management-console-frontend
univention-directory-listener
univention-management-console
univention-system-info
univention-directory-logger
univention-directory-reports
univention-ldap-overlay-memberof
univention-management-console-module-udm
univention-admingrp-user-passwordreset
Comment 3 Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2013-09-20 10:18:10 CEST
(In reply to Philipp Hahn from Bug #30943 comment #10)
> Use amount of before singular things you cannot measure.
> Use quantity of before singular or plural things you can measure.
> Use number of before plural things you can measure.

(In reply to Philipp Hahn from Bug #30943 comment #11)
> Created attachment 5452 [details]
> UCRV QA
Comment 4 Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2013-09-20 12:31:56 CEST
> (In reply to Philipp Hahn from Bug #30943 comment #11)
> > Created attachment 5452 [details]
> > UCRV QA

Merged with some minor modifications (please rebase for diff to your version)

- it's "separated by commas" in English
- BE vs. AE (manual uses BE as well)
- I've applied one additional typo fix I spotted during merging your patch
Comment 5 Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2013-09-20 13:41:10 CEST
(In reply to Moritz Muehlenhoff from comment #4)
> Merged with some minor modifications (please rebase for diff to your version)
> 
> - it's "separated by commas" in English
> - BE vs. AE (manual uses BE as well)
> - I've applied one additional typo fix I spotted during merging your patch

OK:
r44282 | Update/review UCR variable descriptions (Bug #30946)
r44281 | Update/review UCR variable descriptions (Bug #30946)
r44280 | Update/review UCR variable descriptions (Bug #30946)
r44279 | Update/review UCR variable descriptions (Bug #30946)
r44277 | Update/review UCR variable descriptions (Bug #30946)
r44275 | Update/review UCR variable descriptions (Bug #30946)
r44274 | fixes from QA (Bug #30946)

OK: for p in univention-admingrp-user-passwordreset univention-directory-listener univention-directory-logger univention-directory-manager-modules univention-directory-reports univention-ldap-overlay-memberof; do sed -ne 's/Package: //p' "$p/debian/control"; done | ssh xen12 LC_ALL=C xargs apt-cache policy | sed -ne 's/^  Candidate: //p' | sort -u | grep -v 20130920
Comment 6 Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2013-09-23 16:28:09 CEST
can can → but can
Comment 7 Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2013-09-23 16:28:25 CEST
Created attachment 5460 [details]
More fixes
Comment 8 Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2013-09-24 09:26:14 CEST
(In reply to Philipp Hahn from comment #7)
> Created attachment 5460 [details]
> More fixes

Thanks, merged and built.
Comment 9 Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2013-09-24 09:45:40 CEST
OK: r44364-44367,44369
OK: LC_ALL=C apt-cache policy univention-management-console-server univention-management-console-web-server univention-ldap-server univention-directory-notifier univention-directory-listener | grep Candidate
Comment 10 Stefan Gohmann univentionstaff 2013-11-19 06:43:35 CET
UCS 3.2 has been released:
 http://docs.univention.de/release-notes-3.2-en.html
 http://docs.univention.de/release-notes-3.2-de.html

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