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Bug 33210 - Misc errors in DHCP chapter
Misc errors in DHCP chapter
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Product: UCS manual
Classification: Unclassified
Component: IP and network management (DHCP, DNS, firewall, proxy)
unspecified
All Linux
: P5 normal (vote)
: UCS 3.2
Assigned To: Moritz Muehlenhoff
Philipp Hahn
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Reported: 2013-11-08 12:39 CET by Philipp Hahn
Modified: 2015-04-01 13:49 CEST (History)
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Fixes for DHCP chapter (20.80 KB, patch)
2013-11-08 12:39 CET, Philipp Hahn 		Details | Diff
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Description Philipp Hahn univentionstaff 2013-11-08 12:39:59 CET 
Created attachment 5582 [details]
Fixes for DHCP chapter

There are several minor and major errors in the chapter for DHCP:
$ diffstat ~/BUG/33xxx_manual-dhcp.diff 
 developer-reference/developer-reference-3.2.xml |    4 -
 manual/ip-config-de.xml                         |   67 +++++++++++-----------
 manual/ip-config-en.xml                         |   70 +++++++++++-------------
 3 files changed, 69 insertions(+), 72 deletions(-)

1. variable → dynamic (the 'D' in DHCP)
2. host-objects allow dynamic AND static addresses.
3. FQDNs are resolved by the DHCP server (which uses the DNS server)
4. Several copy&paste errors (DHCP-Server)
5. Link mentioned RFCs
6. DHCP Deny/Allow configures what clients are allowed to do.
7. The pages was moved on www.debian.org.
8. Several spelling fixes
9. Change several "should"s into "must"s.
10. Reword some hard to understand sentences.
Comment 1 Moritz Muehlenhoff univentionstaff 2013-11-11 10:24:41 CET 
(In reply to Philipp Hahn from comment #0)
> Created attachment 5582 [details]
> Fixes for DHCP chapter
> 
> There are several minor and major errors in the chapter for DHCP:
> $ diffstat ~/BUG/33xxx_manual-dhcp.diff 
>  developer-reference/developer-reference-3.2.xml |    4 -
>  manual/ip-config-de.xml                         |   67
> +++++++++++-----------
>  manual/ip-config-en.xml                         |   70
> +++++++++++-------------
>  3 files changed, 69 insertions(+), 72 deletions(-)

Thanks! Merged with some fixes on top in revision 45929, please rebase for the differences.
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